Can someone help me with this question that I am stuck on on this TEFL assignment, I would appreciate your thoughts on this. Below is the question and my answer plus the tutor's comments.

Are Intesol online courses worth taking, or should I opt for a provider with ACTDEC accreditation?

Dear friends,

What I notice considerably in the English-learning materials we teach is emphasizing particular cultural norms supporting the idea of globalisation.

I have some observation in teaching practice sessions during the course.

In this course I’d learned that an effective language lesson

Make the teaching/learning interesting and at the same time making sure the Ss learn something. That is the ideal class that I would like to have.